Things that drive journalists (or maybe just me) crazy: First of an occasional series

Yes, this probably does indicate that I have too much time on my hands…

by kadyomalley on Monday, June 30, 2008 3:11pm - 0 Comments

Yes, this probably does indicate that I have too much time on my hands today, which is why I’m headed out with my trusty BerryCam to snap some pics of the pre-Canada Day preparations on the Hill.

Anyway, if there’s one thing that sends me into a frenzy of rereading, it’s when someone sends out a revised version of a press release without including a note to say what has been changed from the original. That’s what PMO did this morning with Stephen Harper’s Canada Day statement, which led to me wasting more minutes that I’m willing to admit trying to figure out the reason for the revision.

Here is the first version, which went out via PMO listserv at 9:57 am:

Date:                           July 1, 2008

For release:               Immediate

STATEMENT BY THE PRIME MINISTER ON CANADA’S 141st BIRTHDAY

OTTAWA – Prime Minister Stephen Harper today issued the following statement marking Canada Day:

“Today, Confederation turns 141 years old and there are more reasons than ever to celebrate our country.

2008 is a year of historic anniversaries: the 400th anniversary of the founding of Quebec City by Canada’s first governor, Samuel de Champlain; the 250th anniversary of the establishment of representative government in Nova Scotia, making Canada one of the world’s first democracies; and the 150th anniversary of the founding of the Crown Colony of British Colombia, ensuring our country would one day stretch from sea to sea.

Beyond all that, this year also witnessed an important evolution in Canada’s relationship with our First Peoples.  On that historic day last month when we gathered on Parliament Hill in a spirit of reconciliation, and as National Chief Fontaine said ‘Together we can achieve the greatness our country deserves.’  How right he is.

Together, we are a united federation of strong provinces and territories.  Together, we are healthy families building strong communities. Together, we are prudent stewards of our precious environment. Together, we are rich in opportunity and diversity, French and English, aboriginal and multicultural, native-born and newcomers. And together, we are making a positive difference in the world, led by the brave men and women of the Canadian Forces in Afghanistan.

Fellow Canadians, every day in countless ways, we are working together to achieve the greatness our country deserves.  That’s why on this Canada Day, we are prouder than ever to call ourselves Canadian.

On behalf of Laureen, Ben, and Rachel and the entire Government of Canada, I wish all of you a Happy Canada Day!”

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And here’s version two, as it appears on the PM’s website:

“Today, Confederation turns 141 years old and there are more reasons than ever to celebrate our country.

2008 is a year of historic anniversaries: the 400th anniversary of the founding of Quebec City by Canada’s first governor, Samuel de Champlain; the 250th anniversary of the establishment of representative government in Nova Scotia, making Canada one of the world’s first democracies; and the 150th anniversary of the founding of the Crown Colony of British Columbia, ensuring our country would one day stretch from sea to sea.

Beyond all that, this year also witnessed an important evolution in Canada’s relationship with our First Peoples.  On that historic day last month when we gathered on Parliament Hill in a spirit of reconciliation, and as National Chief Fontaine said ‘Together we can achieve the greatness our country deserves.’  How right he is.

Together, we are a united federation of strong provinces and territories.  Together, we are healthy families building strong communities. Together, we are prudent stewards of our precious environment. Together, we are rich in opportunity and diversity, French and English, aboriginal and multicultural, native-born and newcomers. And together, we are making a positive difference in the world, led by the brave men and women of the Canadian Forces in Afghanistan.

Fellow Canadians, every day in countless ways, we are working together to achieve the greatness our country deserves.  That’s why on this Canada Day, we are prouder than ever to call ourselves Canadian.

On behalf of Laureen, Ben, and Rachel and the entire Government of Canada, I wish all of you a Happy Canada Day!”

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  • Wayne

    Personally I like actually hearing a speech rather than commenting on text. There is more to communicating than just words. This may be reason everyone comments on Duion’s communicating style as it is not the accent but the demeanour of the communicator. Dion leaves an impression of an academic who isn’t quite sure he means what he says so reverts to high minded ideals and low ball partisan gotcha’s where any question turn into more of the usual Liberal fear and shmear tactics than any substance of value.

  • Scott M.

    Aww Kady, alas you don’t know diff. Really, diff is a program that allows you to tell the difference between two files. Here’s a very simple web version: http://www.qbit.it/lab/diff.php

    Which found:
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    Nothing. Only formatting differences.

  • Mike T.

    I sometimes have similar problems with revised public documents. If you are near a computer with Word, try saving both copies in as similar a format as possible. use the “automerge” function to create a third document. The program should automatically annotate the document, highlighting any changes made between the first and second.

    If you already do this and are merely complaining about the hassle, I apologize in advance.

  • Mike T.

    or better yet follow the advice two posts above, even.

  • Scott M.

    Of course if you are a Microsoft Word fan, you can also use Tools… Compare Documents.

  • john g

    A last parting gift from Sandra Buckler?

  • David

    Was there a booboo in the French version?

  • Chris B

    Perhaps they just wanted to put it out twice (so it could be ignored twice)

  • Teresa Mitchell

    Hey Kady: its obvious! They spelled Columbia wrong! That won’t go over well if they are trying to pick up seats in BC!

  • http://www.macleans.ca Kady O’Malley

    I haven’t got a copy of the original Frennch version, but if I can find one, I’ll let you know. And yes, there is a mistake. I swear. I’d give a hint but that would spoil the fun!

  • http://www.macleans.ca Kady O’Malley

    Theresa gets the prize!

  • Sophie

    They spelled Columbia Colombia.

  • Scott M.

    Huh… I saw a “deleted”, but I thought it was just a space! Good eye!

  • Sophie

    Still, why wouldn’t they just say ‘oops’ instead of wasting time and money on re-releasing it.

  • http://www.macleans.ca Kady O’Malley

    When I first got the re-issue, I figured it was going to fix that incredibly awkwardly worded paragraph on “our” First Nations and the apology, which appears to be missing a clause.

  • A.Political

    lol, they even screw this up! gah, what a bunch of maroons this Reformacon gov is.

  • Wayne

    Oh my god they spelled Columbia wrong – This is unacceptable I demand a public inquiry and what did the PM know and when did he know it!

  • Anon

    “Oh my god they spelled Columbia wrong ”

    Speaks to competence that anybody working in the PMO could get sp of BC wrong. No wonder Buckler is being let go.

    Kady — why aren’t you liveblogging the Giorno transition and the Brodie departure?

  • catherine

    Well, this year Harper managed to leave his supreme being out of his Canada Day speech. He went from last year’s message of his god giving us all this oil to this year’s message of us being precious stewards of the environment. Neither is based in reality. Such is politics.

  • Mike Horn

    So there’s officially nothing happening in federal politics? In all seriousness I really need to keep track of that this year. I have an application that blocks anyone who posts anything about cats, parlimentary or otherwise, so get on with it Kady I have BBQ’s to crash. Unless you’re allowed to Liveblog the Yankee election.

  • Bob

    “Of course if you are a Microsoft Word fan…”

    *Are* there any actual Microsoft Word fans? Does anyone actually *like* Word? If so, what are they doing walking around at liberty, and not under careful psychiatric observation, the poor dears?

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